spaceman2028 wrote:That my friend is an instant subscription. Looking forward to this series a LOT!
The way the kremlings move across the ocean floor like those zombies in Pirates of the Caribbean is epic, but the screen scrolls in on them a bit too fast for my liking. Maybe you could smoothen the animation a bit?
 
 


spaceman2028 wrote:I was talking about how the camera moves into the water for the "Kremlings Underwater" shot, not how they move toward the camera.

Qyzbud wrote:Nice debut episode, Sono and co.
I love the atmosphere of the establishing shots; the island looks lush and inviting, and David Wise's tropical tunes fit perfectly.
On a more critical note, Cranky's model looks really rounded in some spots, and really angular in others, which is a bit strange. He also seems to be gradually sliding to the right during the scene from 0:48 to 1:02, and then downward/toward the camera in his next shot.
As for some aesthetic enhancement ideas, some bubbles, fish, rippling and/or other watery effects might be nice in the seabed scene. I think it'd feel more "right" if the Kremlings' animation cycles were a fair bit slower, too. Lockjaw's Locker illustrates all of this rather well — if you can see through the gloom.
The Coca-Cola product placement is an interesting touch, heh.
Kimi Kong wrote:Haha~! Coca-Cola need to pay you for the product placement~!
 This is fantastic!
 This is fantastic! 
 



 You are welcome, Sono
 You are welcome, Sono 
 
   
 

 i feel that the color of sky could be lighter but it is only my opinion. Poor Donkey kong, surely he is very hungry... come on kongs!
  i feel that the color of sky could be lighter but it is only my opinion. Poor Donkey kong, surely he is very hungry... come on kongs! Disregard this post.
 Disregard this post.Cyclone wrote:It's a bit rough..but I liked it and added a 'like' on the video. If you want me to critique it further let me know.
Looking forward to watching the next episode.
vege wrote:This will go viral!! this chapter has better ambience sounds, new kongs and voices, i like iti feel that the color of sky could be lighter but it is only my opinion. Poor Donkey kong, surely he is very hungry... come on kongs!
PigmaskColonel wrote:Almost perfect! The only "negative" thing I can say is about Dixie's eyes... They're motionless and expressionless, and it's a bit odd. Is there no way to make her eyes move, or was it not done due to time constraints?
EDIT: Was watching on my phone, it's hard to see so I thought her eyes weren't moving even though they are...Disregard this post.





 
   
 Qyzbud wrote:Here you go, Sono — hopefully this helps:
Phyreburnz wrote:Okay, whatever you had planned for your next episodes... cancel it and change it to Cranky Kong Country!

Seriously though, whoever you got for Cranky's voice is friggin' perfect.
vege wrote:This looks epic with the pírate ship, the sounds, the voices, please i want this chapter on youtube soon.



 I am really excited about this project, it looks very nice so far.
  I am really excited about this project, it looks very nice so far. 
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